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COLLECTION NAME: Neil Gunn Writing Competition, 2011 (texts)
CONTRIBUTOR: Highland Libraries
DATE OF ORIGINAL: 2010s
By Susan Richardson

'Isolate' was placed joint first in the Adult Poetry section of the Neil Gunn Writing Competition, 2011. It was written by Susan Richardson, Cardiff.



The theme for 2011 was 'A wrong turning', taken from Neil Gunn's novel 'The Serpent': "Our river took a wrong turning somewhere! But we haven't forgotten the source."



The Neil Gunn Writing Competition is organised by library staff from the Highland Council Education, Culture & Sport Service in partnership with the Neil Gunn Trust. It was first established in 1988.


ISOLATE



The Arctic's mother tongue is ice -

unsurprisingly, once, she was fluent.

She knew, too, the grammar of snow,

learnt to converse with firn and dendrites.

And though a few loan words from melt

dripped in,

ice's purity felt secure.



But then melt-speakers surged

further and further north.

Frozen idioms thinned.

Even the Pole had to begin

to be bilingual.



Now, she gropes for graupel.

Verbs of love, and lullabies, avalanche

from her vocabulary.

Slush is spelt differently these days.



It's too late for a revival,

to force-learn by immersion. Talking

only bergs

for a year won't work.

For the world wants a language of ships ripping

through easy seas, a syntax free

of narwhals and crampons.



The Arctic still dreams in ice.

And when she speaks melt

it's with a rime-tinged accent, a flavour

of old glaciers and floes.



She's supposed to feel pleased

about the freezer archives.

But grief calves

from her throat

now she has no other means

to hear what ice was like.





Some other items in this collection...



'Out of Africa', Commended, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2011

'Out of Africa', Commended, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2011

'The Legacy', Highly Commended, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2011

'The Legacy', Highly Commended, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2011

'Luggage', Second Equal Prize Adult Prose, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2

'Luggage', Second Equal Prize Adult Prose, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2

'Cyclops', Commended, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2011

'Cyclops', Commended, Neil Gunn Writing Competition 2011





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